Friday, August 31, 2012

Photocrop Exercise

1.)


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a.) The chosen cropping choices doesn't necessarily improve the photo, but it completely changes it. The story changes, and instead of showing my brother brushing Brownie, the story is now just about Brownie. 
b.) Components that were eliminated from the original photo is the background, such as the other horses, and my brother. 
c.) Now the focal point is of the horse, Brownie rather than my brother, Dawson.


2.)

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a.) Again these changes didn't improve the image, but change the story. Instead of the photo being about a cat, it is now an image with objects, such as the plant and crochet basket.
b.) Components such as the cat, table, toys, and everything else in the background have been eliminated.
c.) The components were eliminated to make the plant the new focal point, rather than the cat.


3.)


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a.) This picture was improved or changed to focus more on the flip flops. It puts a little more of a mystery on the shoes than there was before. Such as, why are they dirty? Where are they? 
b.) Components that were eliminated were the footprints and the feet. 
c.) Not the focal point and the story of the photo is of the flip flops, not the feet or footprints.

4.)

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a.) The chosen cropping improvements have improved the picture by giving the audience a better view of the center of the flower.
b.) The background and the rest of the outer layers of the flower have been eliminated.
c.) The focal point hasn't necessarily changed, but been improved by making it larger and having it take up most of the frame.

5.)

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a.) The cropping choices have improved this photo by making the focus or the story about one specific fruit rather than many. It is less busy.
b.) Components that were eliminated was the surrounding fruit.
c.) Now the focal point is of the yellow cherry instead of the possibly the kiwi in the original.

6.)

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a.) The cropping choices have changed this picture by creating more of a focus on the objects: the tree, raft, and dock.
b.) The components that have been eliminated is the open space of the lake and sky.
c.) Now the focal point is of the either the raft or the tree. One's eye follows the boardwalk/dock and goes in a circular motion and focuses on the raft, then the tree, then the dock and back to the raft. 

7.)

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a.) The cropping choices have again changed the story of the photo. Instead of the picture telling us about two girls on the beach, it is now of one girl. With it being a close-up, we don't know where she is at, why she is happy, ect. It makes more of a mystery.
b.) Components that were eliminated were the background and the other figure in the picture.
c.) Now the focal point is of the face of one person, rather than two.

8.)

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a.) The cropping choices now allow the view to focus more on the detail of the dog's face.
b.) Components that were eliminated were the rest of the dog's body and the sand around him.
c.) The focal point is still the dogs face, but just improved by showing a close-up version of it, and having it take most of the frame. More specifically, I think the focal point is of his eye.

9.)

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a.) The cropping choices have changed aspects of the photo by leaving out some of the story. Now instead of it being a landscape of mountains and a river, it is just of mountains.
b.) The river and lower portion of the photo has been eliminated.
c.). The focal point is still of the brightest mountain, but now it is just bigger.

10.)

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a.) The cropping choices have changed the picture because now the viewer may not know the size of the body of water or the scale of the rocks around it. 
b.) The "waterfall" or the dripping water and the rest of the rocks have been left out.
c.) Now the focal point is more of the foam rather that the "waterfall."

Visual Journal week #1

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Friday, August 31, 2012